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| Shanima 2006-05-22 ch 1,  | abuseIt's nice to hear such a sweet and optimistic poem. Great poem! Shanima -x- |
| grey spirit 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThe repitition works in your favor for this piece. I like the theme anyways because it's something that occurs to me often, that one's inner child can help more than one thinks. The only thing I could say is, I think you'd be good at taking one of these themes and writing in a more narrative form rather than just an evaluation of emotional states. Just a thought. ^_^ |
| Lady-Poeticro 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abusethx 4 ur review! each review will make me write in a heartbeat... i like this poem a lot because i could totally relate to it whilst growing up as a girl myself. keep writing! |