This makes for an excellent plot. At first I was like eh, but then when I got to the end I was like woah. That's a pretty sweet piece you wrote there and with a great punch at the end. Continue the story.

The lonley life of an artist, aye?

Very nice but short piece.

I'm in complete awe...

Very few short storys keep me interested.. but this was absolutely amazing! and the ending was brilliant.. an excellent twist to the story..

I really hope you had more to this! you can bet I'll be reading it.. I'm sure to review more of your poetry.. your an amazing poet from what I can see so far..