Okay, I'm starting to feel incredibly stupid repeating the same things over and over. Well, whatever. It's fantastic! _

Smooches-Wizzy

This is..I don't know how to put it..Delicious? Addictive? Perfect? All three of them, actually. with the exception of lines 3-4 (isn't it quicker to walk through big doors? no bending. or maybe that's just me. for you, all doors are the same in this way), i think this is my favourite poem of yours. yes, it's better than "nonsensical nonsense"

A delicately crafted tale of abandoment and moving on. Nicely done.