Ooh this sounds really good! Hope you update soon!

Wow...it's good. xD I'm excited. =D

oh oh oh oh this is cool. i like it. it is really interesting!

I like this chapter, I want to read more. Please update soon.

when will this be updated??

Wow, this is pretty well written, and I love the descriptions you paint for the readers (no pun intended...). I hope you continue this, but even if you don't it can rather stand on its own.

That was...sexy. Really sexy. I don't know how t explain it, but it just was. I wish you would continue this. It's so good. I love it!

You're a very creative writer and I have to admit I'm a bit jealous. The stuff you come up with; it's amazing. I really loved your story about Sebastian. He was one of the most interesting characters I've ever encountered. And the Ewan guy is really mysterious...I like him.

I'm sorry about your grandfather and I really hope things get better for you soon. :)
You're an amazing writer and you should really consider getting published one day.

-Taylor

cool first chapter. good job

OMG! more please! that's so intriguing. You're writing is pretty good and its got an interesting exposition. yumy,,hehe.
-ells

Wow, this was a really good piece. It's kinda artsy in itself. The way the painting was described was incredibly mind-blowing. good job!

Ewan is satan. I LOVE HIM. He's so irritable. I hate it when people contradict what I'm saying about art (such as Alaina did) because isn't it kinda your opinion and **.
Anywayz this is sweet. Is Alaina a painter? Why were they both at the art gallery? Are you gonna update this?

More please its interesting im intrigued

This looks like a really good story, I can't wait to read more. Update soon

WAHAHA

I usually just say that most art is **. They're art because someone said they're art, no need to go on about it you know XDD BUT! It's a good thing in this story, since...I don't know, I loved that XDD

Awesome language. The story is weaved in a subtle and beautiful way.

Good job!

This I like! A lot. It really makes you think and see art in a different way. Update, okay?