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Reviews For: Outside the art gallery

Black Viper
2008-06-02
ch 1,
abusecool first chapter. good job
elliebelle
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseOMG! more please! that's so intriguing. You're writing is pretty good and its got an interesting exposition. yumy,,hehe.
-ells
luv me like no other
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abuseWow, this was a really good piece. It's kinda artsy in itself. The way the painting was described was incredibly mind-blowing. good job!
hairy-mushroom-nose
2007-08-21
ch 1,
abuseEwan is satan. I LOVE HIM. He's so irritable. I hate it when people contradict what I'm saying about art (such as Alaina did) because isn't it kinda your opinion and **.
Anywayz this is sweet. Is Alaina a painter? Why were they both at the art gallery? Are you gonna update this?
eve
2007-01-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseMore please its interesting im intrigued
Lightning Storm
2006-05-19
ch 1,
abuseThis looks like a really good story, I can't wait to read more. Update soon
Limited Edition
2006-05-19
ch 1,
abuseWAHAHA

I usually just say that most art is **. They're art because someone said they're art, no need to go on about it you know XDD BUT! It's a good thing in this story, since...I don't know, I loved that XDD

Awesome language. The story is weaved in a subtle and beautiful way.

Good job!
Moon Demoness
2006-05-19
ch 1,
abuseThis I like! A lot. It really makes you think and see art in a different way. Update, okay?
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