Ata:*watches MN warily*
MN: *reads poem with tears in eyes*
Merla: s'yuit-de...
MN: it's ... beautiful... *bursts into tears*
Merla: Uh... she's not normally like this, honest.
Ata: this poem just strikes a chord with some recent events...
Merla: *nods* hai. It's a lovely poem though.
Ata: hai hai!and as a favourite teacher once said: A poem is truly successful when it calls to the very heart of those who read it, and stirrs a response there. Poetry is to be felt, not scrutinized.
Merla: *glances at MN* oh she's feeling it alright.

whoa, nice poem!! i usually read stuff like this, and while it all sounds good, i never understand what it means. but props to you, you managed to make it sound awesome and have it make sense.

i like that line, "I don't ask for forgiveness, /
Nor for eternal understanding;" I love that phrase, eternal understanding. very deep.

"Through My Fault", you have to love the Latin and that is one of my favorites Latin phrases. Im adding this to my favs because it is really good and i