I feel like I missed something, but that could be because I was so confused the first two chapters and don't remember much of anything about them. The rules of this spirit world seem a little bit arbitrary.

Hmm, interesting. It seems unlikely that a group of people woulnd't use names- even if they all know one another really good, they're going to need some way to refer to one another. Would he tell his friends "That girl who looks this way Transferred power to a baby"?

I really like the symbollism. At the beginning, some of your more involved sentences were harder to follow, but other than that, I liked this piece, and its message.