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| Wowingglow 2007-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseThat's just plain freaky. A few mistakes with grammar, but good |
| Travis C. Eckert 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseAnyone reading this, yeah... I wouldn't do that, I just notice some grammatical errors here and there. Was a while since I read the original, based on it though. Good job overall. Just scary to hear Travis all over it knowing it refers to me in some sense. |
| angel953 2006-10-21 ch 1, | abuseomg caitlin! you need help!1 i think im gonna block travis again. great job! =O |
| Viktrona 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abuseCreepy. I love the story line. The writting is really good. I belive it can be written better once you mature more when you write. Since the more you write the better you get. |
| i.am.the.winter 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abusenice job. i think even though it's a short story, the mystery could have taken another twist, but it's still well done. and it is similar to my story, i didn't know that. and don't worry, i'm going to update soon. hope you enjoy it. -- the devil in a midnight mass |
| NowNameless 2006-05-27 ch 1, | abuseHey, That's GREAT! Much better than the orriginal. a few changes, beautifuly written. i like how you changed the murderer to be travis, and how they were murdered in diffrent ways this time. MUCH better. also its more realistic. WRITE ON! (*Gasp* its so good, 'write on got THERR exclamation points!) -Nameless- |
| Pheo 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseOh I love this story!! its very very godGREAT WORK!!~Lots of Love and Pain Mezo~ |