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| -RomanticallyCliched- 2008-07-30 ch 28,  | abuseso cute! sequel? |
| utfan23456 2008-06-12 ch 28, | abuseoutragous! totally awesome. but they didnt say i love you! oh well |
| caged.girl 2008-05-11 ch 28, | abusewow. that was a good one. though i don't agree with within temptation being like evanescence. anyway, good story, it kept me laughing at some parts and got me angry at others. keep on the good work. |
| Jellie Bean 2008-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi Mistress-K99! So I haven't actually read the whole chapter yet, but I needed to say this while I remember lol Unless Megan weighs around 200 pounds it is physically impossible for her to be a 46B. You're probably wondering why I said this, I'll explain. When buying underwear, cup size is judged by the letter, so an A cup is smaller than a B cup that is smaller than a C cup and so on. So by saying she's a 46B, you're actually saying she's really fat and flat chested. Big breasts (without being ridiculously big) would fill a C cup nicely and maybe go on to a D cup without being freakishly huge. The number before the cup size is actually how big the girl's torso is (in bra-measuring) and a normal size for a slim teenage girl (and a slim adult too) would be between 32 and 36. Sorry to go on and on about bras and proper measurement, but it really pains me to see stories without accuracy simply because no one bothered to help. I hope I didn't offend you or anything... on to reading! |
| PrincessNancy 2008-03-23 ch 28, | abuseThis is bloody freakin' awesome! Got me hooked and speehcless.. (I realise I've been saying the same to almost all the stories Im reading.. FP has AWESOME authors!) XoXo NAN! |
| atreyu love 2007-12-31 ch 28, | abusethe group gonna stay together forever? lol all the couples? :) thatd be cute! and i think that Will is SUPER CUTE! especially with the "Luv" part :) haha. |
| atreyu love 2007-12-31 ch 19, | abusehaha. Ethan is so funny XD |
| Who cares? 2007-11-11 ch 28, anon. | abuseWow. I loved it! |
| Jessica Wolfheart 2007-11-09 ch 28, | abuseThis was excellent. during th elast few chapters, namely th eones with Dacid and such, I was clenching my teeth so hard that my cheeks and jaw still hurt. Very well done. Nicely written. JW |
| YoungInside 2007-09-08 ch 28, | abuseWill is so sweet! Gah! Great story. Your writing style could use a lot of work but I loved the plot. =) |
| Lightning Storm 2007-07-12 ch 28, | abuseOh man. I loved this story from begining to ending. Its awesome. You have an amazing talent for writting... Keep it up |
| Mrs. Drama Lover 2007-06-03 ch 28, | abusebest story writin |
| amo angel324 2007-05-24 ch 28, | abusethis is such a good story! i love it! |
| Tempest116 2007-03-30 ch 28, | abuseI wish Will kicked Davids ** again fr what he did. I was so mad... Anyway, I'm glad everything worked out okay and Kris survived. I enjoyed the fic, good job. ^_^ |
| nd 2007-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseher bra size is 46B? does that actually exist or was that exaggeration cos i fing it hard to beleive that kris can have a bigger boobs than that.. apart from that i love the story so far...keep up the gd work |