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3DarkGoddess3 2009-04-21 . chapter 28
I really enjoyed the story. Will is so adorable.
Alenor 2009-03-23 . chapter 28
heya, great story!
autumn-annette-19 2009-03-14 . chapter 28
Great story, keep up the good work.
MostWantedDesire 2008-12-28 . chapter 28
hey, just wanted to say that i absolutely love this story. it is one of the best ones that i have read. even though it is a bit of a cliche, and the ending was kind of expected, i loved it.
Hazelnut Romance 2008-07-30 . chapter 28
so cute! sequel?
utfan23456 2008-06-12 . chapter 28
outragous! totally awesome. but they didnt say i love you!
oh well
caged.girl 2008-05-11 . chapter 28
wow. that was a good one. though i don't agree with within temptation being like evanescence. anyway, good story, it kept me laughing at some parts and got me angry at others. keep on the good work.
Jellie Bean 2008-05-03 . chapter 1
Hi Mistress-K99!

So I haven't actually read the whole chapter yet, but I needed to say this while I remember lol
Unless Megan weighs around 200 pounds it is physically impossible for her to be a 46B. You're probably wondering why I said this, I'll explain. When buying underwear, cup size is judged by the letter, so an A cup is smaller than a B cup that is smaller than a C cup and so on. So by saying she's a 46B, you're actually saying she's really fat and flat chested. Big breasts (without being ridiculously big) would fill a C cup nicely and maybe go on to a D cup without being freakishly huge. The number before the cup size is actually how big the girl's torso is (in bra-measuring) and a normal size for a slim teenage girl (and a slim adult too) would be between 32 and 36.

Sorry to go on and on about bras and proper measurement, but it really pains me to see stories without accuracy simply because no one bothered to help. I hope I didn't offend you or anything...

on to reading!
PrincessNancy 2008-03-23 . chapter 28
This is bloody freakin' awesome!

Got me hooked and speehcless.. (I realise I've been saying the same to almost all the stories Im reading.. FP has AWESOME authors!)

XoXo

NAN!
atreyu love 2007-12-31 . chapter 28
the group gonna stay together forever? lol
all the couples? :) thatd be cute!
and i think that Will is SUPER CUTE!
especially with the "Luv" part :)
haha.
atreyu love 2007-12-31 . chapter 19
haha. Ethan is so funny XD
Who cares? 2007-11-11 . chapter 28
Wow. I loved it!
Jessica Wolfheart 2007-11-09 . chapter 28
This was excellent. during th elast few chapters, namely th eones with Dacid and such, I was clenching my teeth so hard that my cheeks and jaw still hurt. Very well done. Nicely written.

JW
YoungInside 2007-09-08 . chapter 28
Will is so sweet!
Gah!

Great story.
Your writing style could use a lot of work but I loved the plot. =)
Lightning Storm 2007-07-12 . chapter 28
Oh man. I loved this story from begining to ending. Its awesome. You have an amazing talent for writting... Keep it up
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