Reviews for Predator of the Deep

Chesu
2006-06-04
ch 1,

abuseI wonder how big the predator really is. It says that it's the biggest thing known to the area, but how big is that compared to what we know?

I always enjoy reading stories set in the first person of something unknown. The predator is clearly intelligent, but seems overly evolved. That is, it has evolved with more features that it is likely to need, similar to a chameleon. It seems odd that such a successful creature could go for so long without encountering some sort of competition.

Has anyone ever told you that you should publish a book of short stories?

Kawaii Chibi Kitty Angel
2006-05-21
ch 1,

abuseHmm... this is very original, and very intriguingly written; however. I'm a little unclear on what the creature- our narrator- is. Is it something yourself created or a leviathan or kraken? The mouth beneath it and the tentacles speaks of krakens, but they don't generally absorb things, to my knowledge. :P

This really is amazingly written, though; it gives both a personal and impersonal view of the creature, and how it rules and its reactions.

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