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| MizSphinx 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseMan that last four lines just rocked! Shows perseverance ya know...that they aint gonna give up soon no matter how many failures, they gonna WIN. I liked, I liked. Great job, keep it up! --MizSphinx |
| Stang65 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abuseSuch determination in this poem. Really good. We all try to be good people, but we all have to fight against the darker nature that also dwells within us. Very well done. Well said. |