I have questions and comments! Why do u think God has forgotten u? God doesn't do things for u, He HELPS u do things for urself but u have to help urself too. did u ever think that He has been there all along, but u just haven't been looking in the right places. and u can't forget that u have to be willing to give ur whole life to him. Another question...if u don't believe He exists, then why r u so mad at Him? anywayz, when u first give ur life to God, everything may seem hopeless, but things get better because ur no longer suffering alone. All I'm saying is... don't focus on the bad things that happen in ur life. Focus on the good things. Like ur clothes, food, anythings basically!

again that sounds lke ** I would say xD zOMG you're turning into me! -giggles at the horrible rhyme- just kidding, but of course I like this one! because of the god hating of course, but you did well with the rhyme scheme! go you!

uhmm. great poem. a unique one. ironic (i just can see some irony) maybe you have gone through a lot. but maybe its you who have turned your back that's why you can't see Him. don't hold on to satan a lot. he's the great deceiver. everything we'll be alright. don't thing to much. sometimes its better to be a monk who just sit and meditate thinking about nothing.i'm sorry for the comment

hm.. nice poem.. i really liked the words and the flow.. but i really did a double take on your anger towards God. but then again, i dont know what you've been through.. still, nice job here..

I'm sorry but if you were truly an atheist you would not be writing a poem begging with the words "dear god" no matter what follows... besides that great poem! But its not god you should be mad at its religion... since god hasnt ever been seen (suspicious no?) then he hasnt ever really said anything to anybody... all you know of him is what "THEY" tell you... "THEY" being so called "religious leaders"... SO... besides that... its a great poem...

i can feel so much anger and hatred here...i guess you've been through a lot..i cant blame you for what you feel though..i just hope that god is reading this...btw, i like your poem, well written eventhough its so dark...