I also liked chapter 34 because of the desperation you wrote about for the boy that you want so badly. We have all experienced such a need even when we know that the possibility of attaining it is slim. I thought it was well worded and passionate.

I liked your piece God Helps because i feel that it was beautifully versed, however, i think that the ending could have been a little more passionate... it just seems so simple for such a meaningful poem, however that might be what you were aiming for and either way i loved it.

Is that Fell or Feel? I'm not quite sure since feel since to be the more appropriate word.

From my point of view this looks like a poem that talks about the limitations of the human mind. O.o. Something intresting that makes me write a poem of my own! Thanks for the inspiration!

'tis...hmm...

I sugest you move this to poetry, since it is poetry. It's great. A good choice of words and a good mixture of rhythm and rhyme.

hm...interesting thanks for the review