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| reddishrocker 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseHOTNESS! XD |
| penguinking93@yahoo.com 2008-03-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh i like this alot! =] |
| rishyyfishyyfailuree.heyyki... 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseohmywow. this. is. amazing! |
| j.d. egan 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseThe story is very simple and commonplace. But what can I say? I love it. I like it when the guy we thought is straight shocks us for confessing he's not. |
| Vigniti Tres 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseAiee. This was really cute. I love your one-shots, they make me so happy inside.Thanks for the comment, too ^_^. |
| AppLEaves 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseGah! The best-friend-who-is-your-unrequited-love stuff again! And yay (!!) because it's a best-friend-who-is-your-unrequited-love stuff! Sorry, got carried away with the hypens. Anyway, (OHMYGOD) you mentioned crossdressing! I love crossdressing, even if there really isn't any in here. And then the sexy/wet/only-in-a-towel-and-ALMOST-naked best friend. Can't get any better than that. And Truth or Dare! Truth or Dare! The best game in the world! Why do people think it's middle-school-ish? And drunk Truth or Dare too. You've got it all in here. Amazing. You are way too good with this writing thing. Me want your inspiration. ["I like guys too." Aaron admitted. "You most of all."] Squeal squeal squeal squeal! -Apple |
| GetBehindMeSatan 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI'm really trying not to start this review with "aw!", and as I've typed this, strictly I *won't* be, but... Aw!... e.e;; Okay. Now that that's out of the way, I'd just like to say that this is *cute* in a don't-listen-to-the-new-and-depressing-song-by-Pink-while-reading-cause-it-makes-you-hyper!sort of way. I think my fave. lines were where Ethan said (thought?): "The view of him in the shorts he slept in. Yum." and: "She who dresses me up as a girl." Some of the sentances had me thinking (wow), but it might have been because I though there were a few missing commas ( but that might have been just me... -.^; ) But, over all, this was a cute ickle fic. And the ending had me cooing. ^_^ Be proud of your ability to make me coo, Chaanna (P.S Thankies for the review(s). And I'll explain in the next chapter that J'aime isn't ...J'aime's real name. Thanks again. x) |
| Karasu-sama 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAWE!! That was so sweet. X3 I like the idea that you used in this. I haven't seen many stories at all where they play a truth or dare game as they play a fighting game. ^_^ That's original, and I might have to steal it in RL. Haha!! I hope you do more than a one-shot on this, cuz I really like the two. I want to know more about Ethan's twin and some more hell she puts him through, I want to know how Aaron and Ethan met... all of that. You've gotten me attached with one little story!! I love the word telly. I know that might be so random and weird, but I really like that word. ^_^ It just makes me giggle so much. I'm off to read more!! --Zephyr |
| Luci-chan's Lunchbox Of Doo... 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is great! You're a really good writer, even if this is the first story I've actually reviewed (I'm bad for that). ^^ ♥'s and X-Rated Thoughts-- Luci-chan |
| okkfdsnjgjfewdkj 2006-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseHOW happy :):) :)! |
| the little angel of darknes... 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseo that was so cute!! awsome story! |
| hyper leaping frog 2006-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abusewow. that was awsome! i thought the idea of the vodka and truth or dare was fantastic. i hope someday i have a friend that comes up with that idea. not that i'd go make out with any of my friends...my mom won't let me go over to any guy's houses. LOVE THE STORY! |
| Profiterole 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseSuch a wonderful story. ^_^ You rock! |
| Two Steps Behind 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, idk what a one shot is but I'm seriously hoping that doesnt mean you wont be adding to it. This was great, and completely non traditional which i love. |