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| Emmytastic gal 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is so true! At the time, you never notice how immature you were, but looking back it really is quite obvious... this poem is great. I love the questions and the italics. awesome work. write on, -Em |
| fairEtales 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseLove it. Except, I think that maybe you should dig deeper into the statements. "They're smaller and younger." Well, yeah, they are younger. They are freshmen. But, how do you mean it? I think it is really good. "Or did we grow up a little?" I really like that line. I really know what you are talking about...It's like all these stupid little kids, so young and immature. And then you realize, wait, that was me just a few years back. Anyway, I think that just that line would have been a perfect ending. I think that it would have left the reader hanging...like, did we or are we just taller? You know? Well, I liked it. Thx for the review! |
| LiveToTheFullest 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThe complete truth! I like it. |