Reviews for Oh Lord, take me backin time

Yaolyn 2006-05-20 ch 1,	abuseThe last part surprised me a bit, it started off as a sweet poem, only to end with the hard truth. I like the first paragraph.
The Moribund Marionette 2006-05-20 ch 1,	abuseHm...this has me pondering. I shall ponder for quite awhile.