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| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abusethis is so cute! i can so relate to this with my bf! great work! ~SarahJane |
| Rono 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseEep! This one has to be one of the greatest poems ever! *Dies from amazement* |
| Smeagol Fasir Kenobi 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, I love how this can apply to anyone, not just a boyfriend or a girlfriend. I have a couple friends like this, and though the particular one coming to mind right now is, in fact, a guy, the relationship isn't romantic. So I really like the fact that this can apply to people who are simply friends.Very nice, mellon nin--Smeagol Fasir Kenobi |
| HgBookworm 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseExcellent poem. I can certainly realte to the feeling of loving someone more than everything else in nature that you've always known and loved. It's such a wonderful feeling and your poem portrays it beautifully. Good luck with your future writing. -HgBookworm |
| xInSaNexBlOodyxPrInCeSs 2006-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay! You know I love it. ^^ The last stanza is really, really good. And all of it's true, too~which is why it's good. Now I must go, because I have to figure out how the Revolutionary War is just a series of extremely lucky coincidences. (BLEH FOR SEMINAR!) luv, ~inhye |
| lovelikeamixtape 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseaw, this is so cute. you did a really nice job with this- it's not as cliche as i think most poems of this nature would be because the things you say are actually clever. good work :) |