cool story! hey, you know that he can sue her for custody and emotional trauma, right? lol, i would be SO ** if my boyfriend left me for a guy...

The summary for this fic really caught my attention. I suck at writing summaries...

Anyway, this was an interesting start and a nice little introduction to the characters. I do have a few things I'd like to point out though...

I felt that Ryan's reaction to Jeff's announcement regarding Mistie and her kid was a little...unrealistic. I don't know about you, but if my boyfriend decided to tell me that he's the father of someone else's child, I'd at least be a little shocked. Actually, scrap that. Very shocked, especially if I didn't know their ex was pregnant in the first place.

There were a few hiccups along the way with punctuation, grammar and syntax- I guess you could probably do with a beta (but then again, we all do)- but all in all it wasn't a bad read.

I rather enjoyed it actually. The switching between Ryan and Jeff's situations was good; structuring fics like that doesn't always work but it seemed fitting with this one. Nice job.