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| DarkBlysse 2007-05-29 ch 1,  | abuseSo true. For now, at least, as we're actively killing this beautiful world of ours. |
| justbreathe241 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abuseamazing metaphor, and the rhyming adds a nice tone |
| ittybittytreefrog 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseWoe. This is amazingly powerful and concise. I really like the effect of the rhymed couplets. Great meaning, great metaphor. |
| BranwenEithne 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Simple but profound and undeniably true. Life comes full circle. |
| spiderfly 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseSweet and good rhythm. Keep it up! |
| Made in Britain 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseTrue, and we're ruining it all. Nature will soon fight back against the strange animals that walk on two legs and know how to use tools. |