I love your first few lines. They drew me in and reminded me of long joyful days I have spent in various coffee shops. The last ten lines or so left me with a light-hearted feeling. One of my favorite lines is "suddenly, my vision of newborn love..." Although the blinds were pulled, one more amaretto is ordered. Perfect ending.

Wow! I LOVE this! I can't believe you have so few reviews for this! You are absolutely an amazing writer! This is so well done! Like I said before, you really have to become an author! Even if you just do a collection of short stories like this! I would totally buy them all! You wrote this so well, delving perfectly into the world of humans that we live in today. It was amazing! I loved that you actually had the courage to point out religion in this story. I've had issues with religious things myself, so I can totally relate. I don't know if you're religious or not, but bravo! This was absolutely amazing for such a simple story! I love your stuff! Please write more short stories like this one. You're so good at it.

wow, the point of view, the feeling, the sense of longing, very good rochelle, very good

~q~