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| last minute rush 2008-07-26 ch 18,  | abuseNo 18 chapters and still no kiss :( But I'm sure you'll be able to whip up something even better in the next chapter =P Wonder why Sammy's so distraught..and is Justin going to appear later on? or is he a really minor character? This chapter was really sweet and cute please update with more Adel/Tristan :) looking forward to it heaps ^^ |
| girlgamer112 2008-07-25 ch 18, anon. | abuseIt had to be Sammy of all people that ruined their 'almost kiss.' Great chapter as usual.. but what ever happened to Justin? I thought Tristan was suppose to have some like crazy kung-fu brawls with Justin stealing Adel from him.. or maybe that was just my interpretation of his character. hehe Also, how many more chapters until the two lovebirds kiss, eh? Will it be at like the end of the story or will you just make it a surprise?? Anyways, I will be waiting patiently for your next update. =) |
| Puuka 2008-07-25 ch 13, | abuseCan't wait for the next chapter! Please say you'll post it this weekend. |
| akaCHEEKS 2008-07-24 ch 18, | abusewoah! i haven't checked this story out in a while. can't believe you've got new chapters up! i'm excited! |
| s-pecial-lee me 2008-07-24 ch 18, | abuseaww yay! progress! can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Th3 UnKnowN 2008-07-24 ch 18, | abuseOMMG how long is it going to be until you update next? LMAO kidiing.. loved it and just update soon alright coz i want to find out what happens |
| Susan 2008-07-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseHi, I really like your writing style and sense of creativity, your work is awesome! Oh, and I'd like to point out that in the "first section", "ninth para./last para", "first sentence". I think you might have put "eyes" instead of "keys". Keep up the good work! Susan |
| HelloLovely 2008-07-22 ch 18, | abuseGeh! I wanna knoww hat hapenenenenes! :] Haha, can't wait for the next chapter. Love, Becca |
| Splutter 2008-07-22 ch 18, | abuseAWH WOWOWOWOWOW best. chapter. ever! i was fully surprised, i didn't think you were going to sic their first kiss for us so soon. guess i was right. but oh wow. very nicely done. |
| HelloLovely 2008-07-21 ch 11, | abuseGr. I hate reading this story! Every chapter leaves me exasperated because I just know that there's things that I DON'T know and so I have to keep reading and omg I want to shoot Tristan. And I don't want him to like Sammy anymore. It's all so frustrating, so I must read on to quench my curiosity. Love, Becca |
| wh00t 2008-07-21 ch 18, anon. | abuseOMG THE BEST! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! ^_^ |
| Realistic Dreams 2008-07-21 ch 18, | abuseYou know, initially I wasn't sure about the Adel/Tristan pairing, but I really enjoyed this chapter. They have quite a few things in common and I can definitely see them together now. I just have one question: Where can I get a guy like Tristan? Haha I've always preferred him over Vincent. But anyway, great job as usual on this chapter and congrats on the skow nomination! |
| minime 2008-07-21 ch 18, anon. | abuseThanks for the update! O.O Cliffy? ish. Here are some sentences that sounded funny(grammar): And since when, again, did she needed reminding? "She knew that once she get back inside, the heat would encourage a rush of blood to her ears..." He appraised her out of her corners of his eyes. |
| gulistanlik 2008-07-21 ch 18, | abuseNO! Okay Tristan cannot make an 'caught up in the moment' excuse because Adel spoke normally etc. and he had plenty of time to retreat. I knew there was going to be an interruption! I wonder what Sammy wants, it better be good for ruining their almost kiss like that. =D gulistanlik |
| RandiRose 2008-07-21 ch 18, | abuseSKoW under Amazing Wordsmith and Most Humorous? What is that? |