heya!

Okay, cool story! Well, beginning chapter. Lol, you explained so much in the first chapter! I guess thats good for us who have read false facades, but i dunno about new readers...anyway, i like the use of chinese-ness, ASIAN power! It gives it an exotic touch to the story, i like your new character, she sounds like me, haha.

Be careful not to make it too much like false facades, the love/hate thing i mean.

Its an awesome and long chapter, so keep up the good work, and hopefully i dont have to wait about half a year until the next update! Just kidding.

Lin

Yey! You're back and it looks like the ball will just keep on rolling. Great beginning but when do we find out her name? Ahh, I was starting to wonder when I'd find something alse to read! Can't wait for the next one and it seems I'll be reading from the very beginning this time. Just a tip to make it easier on yourself, try to write an outline and plan out the story line that you have in your head to make it easier to rearrange things when the plan in your head decides to take some new twist and then you can accomadate for it, also try to write a few chapters ahead of what your posting so that you have time to sit on it and revise it to make it perfect for you. If these were unwanted then sorry but I just wanted to pass on useful information to correct problems other authors have so you don't find yourself suffering in the same way. Have fun, I know I always do as a reader. Im so glad it's Tristan's turn! WooHoo!

Great intro, I'm really looking foward to a good story.

I really like tristan! And this new girl sure is interesting! I'm so excited about your story! I hope you update soon!

o whoohoo! This sounds like it's going to be an interesting story! haha I can not wait for the next update. _

OMG! Thank you so much for udating. I've missed you so much! Anyhoo, this was great. I can't wait to get to know our new heroine! Keep up the awesome work!

Good luck, BeachButterfly

woho! she's back! and producing more great stuff! lol. You have no idea how much I've missed your characters. Tristan was always a favourite of mine, though I might not have said it much. Still. So? When will we finally meet the Asian chick? I mean, get actually introduced to her. It figures that she would be the daughter of some rich firm or something, but still. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more! I gotta go make dinner though, cuz my parents are outa town and I got five other siblings (and i'm the second youngest-pfft), so ciao!

-Abzle

hey! wow...i am kinda interested in where this story is going to go. i loved False Facades and the thought of having all those characters (and new ones) in another story is enough to make me drool a river! lol...personally, the girl kinda sounds just a tiny bit annoying and that may just be her character for now but still...or it could be that she doesnt know the back story while us readers do and it pisses us off how inconsiderate she is, even though she doesnt know she's being inconsiderate. whew...i hope that made sense. anyway, interesting story, keep up with it and i really can't wait till we meet and gang and the story actually begins!

Hoorah! That was lovely. Very interesting. Can't wait to find out who the girl is. Tristan I love! Most awesome name ever too... It was well worth the wait, and the little bit with Will made me giggle a lot! _

this was great. I really like this. nice start. Mel

Yay team! I really like your story. I'm so glad you made a sequal :D I'm going to guess that the girl is going to be one of the more prominent characters?

Hey that was interesting. Have you ever been to China yourself? Hmm. Will is so cute! Update soon.

A nice opening chapter although the coincidences seem a little unrealistic. However, it is fiction after all.

I can see where this is going. And I can't wait to find out if I'm right or not. Great first chapter. I'm looking forward to next week already - and that's pretty big, seeing as I've got three exams next week (shudder).Great work! I love your stories, you know I do! ;)

i am loving this already! that girl is so cool, can't wait to find out her name, and WILL!i love him:)