|Reviews for Through Me|
| InkIntoLife 5/4/13 . chapter 30
Just like False Facades was, this was great. I loved Tristan from the moment he told Caine (in False Facades) that he liked Sam, but he wasn't going to get in the way for her and Vincent's sakes. I also love how you made Adel so insecure, so tough, yet so weak. She seems so much like a real person. You should totally make a series of these! (Next book: WillXSomeone? I'm pretty sure one of the Will-lovers will gladly step up to get that role xD)
| Midnight'sRevenge 5/3/13 . chapter 30
Noooo I refuse to believe this story is over I love it way to much! Is it weird that Will and Cain are my favorite people?
| Sorrel 4/29/13 . chapter 30
I'm glad that I came across both this and False Facades after their completion. I don't think My sanity would have survived those year long waits. X_x
But I just wanted to say how amazingly amazing (yes, you read that right!) your writing is. I hope you continue to write and improve in the future!
Also ... WILL IS THE BEST CHARACTER EVER AND DESERVES A STORY OF HIS OWN WITH SOME BOY/GIRL WHO CAN PUT UP WITH HIM! SO PLEASE WRITE ONE!
That is all.
| Aria657 4/16/13 . chapter 30
Omb. :P Poor Adam... Being inflected with Will.
(And knowing me I'm gonna start shipping them or something... :P)
| Lady Milana 4/13/13 . chapter 30
This was truly as amazing as False Facades.
I loved Adeline's character because I found I could really relate to her. Adeline was very real, and slightly awkward at interacting with people.
I'm glad you made things realistic by having Adel stay away for a few months, instead of her coming back the next chapter.
I must say I like the Tristan and Adel relationship even better than Sammy and Vincent (sorry guys), because they have such amusing banter and aren't a really cheesy couple in love. They have some communication errors, but that can be ironed out later.
I must say that the Chinese New Year's dinner was very realistic, as was the grave visiting ritual. I do remember that when I visited some of my ancestor's graves in China we burned those silver paper money things?
I was already laughing when someone kept brushing Adel's hand and she turned around to knee the 'Europerv' in the balls. Adel's violent tendecies are also something I can relate to.
All in all I enjoyed this story as much as (and maybe even more) than False Facades. Partly because Victoria got a black eye.
Lots of love,
| XDon'tEatTheCeleryX 4/4/13 . chapter 30
Wow. I love this story! I can safely say that it's my favourite on this site so far, with False Facades in close second as it was, after all, because I read that that I decided to read Through Me. You had me laughing out loud and grinning like a maniac at times, particularly in scenes involving Will and also Adel and Tristan's conversations. Please, please write another novel! Please! :)
| Guest 4/1/13 . chapter 30
i first started reading this story years ago and i still find it so cute :3
| Elle 3/16/13 . chapter 30
Thank you for writing. I cannot put into words the sheer appreciation I have for you as a writer. I hope that your skill only grows. I wish you all the happiness you can gather for yourself. Thank you.
| m0dern 2/17/13 . chapter 1
I knew for some reason that I liked Tristan more.(; I have to admit, I do like this story a bit more than "False Facades", though don't get me wrong, that story is also another of my favorites! I liked how much more complicated this story was(I found it more suspenseful) and how it built up. I liked reading about how Adel and Tristan's feelings evolved for each other and their chemistry with each other. I thought I wouldn't like Adel at first, but then I found myself liking her character more than Sam. Overall, I really loved the story.(: Keep up the great writing!
| Guest 1/27/13 . chapter 4
I really enjoy the witty, yet hilarious, remarks you have throughout each chapter.
(ex: Will stayed quiet for a second. "That flustered blush of hers really calls up the alpha male protective instinct, doesn't it?"
"Yeah," Tristan snorted. "Right up 'til she pitches you over her shoulder.")
Once again, Adeline is awesome! :) Sammy is too cute, Vincent is greatly (is this even a word?) funny in his protectiveness over Sammy, and Tristan is just cool. There are too many awesome things in your chapter to comment about so I'll just say I love it! :)
| Guest 1/27/13 . chapter 3
The conversation between Tristan and Vincent - intense. They seem to be striving to get along but the tension of both of them liking the same girl seems to be there to slowen that process... a lot. And this part - ''I know.'' Tristan drove on. ''I know.'' - makes me get the impression he's resigned to the fact and that he's sad about it... like a horrible fact he has to keep in mind... I don't know if it was supposed to give me that feeling but it did.
And this scene:
Sammy's eyes widened and she shook her head just as the hooded pervert stiffened and started to turn around to face Tristan. But by this time, Tristan had already crossed the room and he quickly slung his arms around the stranger in a tight death grip. And that's when Tristan noticed something strangely peculiar. His hands probed hesitantly.
Both the captive and the captor froze rock solid.
Either the boy was really, really flabby or – "Why the heck do you have – what – how - why the hell are you like a girl?"
There was a deathly silence and then the stranger hissed, "Maybe it's because I am a girl."
Absolutely hilarious. And honestly, this is the best and funniest second meeting any two characters had for me... And I'm usually a person who doesn't really like switching of point of views but your story is one where I don't mind it at all. I just love the characterization and details of your characters and story. :)
| Guest 1/27/13 . chapter 2
Wow - way to end a story with me at the edge of my seats (but not literally, of course.) Tristan is still harbouring feelings for Sammy, isn't he? I feel so sad for him...
Although, the whole going-to-a-girl's-school, Mr. Lee saying - maybe there's just one particular girl you're supposed to meet, and then the mysterious conversation all seem to be hinting to something happening between Tristan and a girl - who is obviously Adel. Amazing, amazing foreshadowing, and I can't wait to see my favourite character in this story - however, it's really hard to say so because Tristan is a close behind...
| Guest 1/27/13 . chapter 1
I don't what it is about your story but it's absolutely wonderful. I can't help but love both of the characters - Tristan and Adel, especially the latter (I especially love her last thought - ''Well. I guess this means you're meant to be mine, after all.'')!
The way they meet is very interesting, and I can't help but laugh at how that old lady keeps on popping up and the whole misunderstanding with the necklace... And wonderful descriptions...
| Street-SmartFighterGirl 1/24/13 . chapter 1
I love Tristan! This is by far the best story I've read on fictionpress. :))) Keep writing, you're a great writer. :D
| NaoEarthGoddess 12/31/12 . chapter 30
Very nice story! Lol I hope Will gets lucky with Adam! Haha, thanks for posting this story it was a pleasure. ;) ... u should totally write one about Will! :)