well, i;m not sure i totally understand it but i loved the way it flowed and the words you used

they worked really well

Nice imagery and symbolism. I liked the comparing and contrasting of elements to the warrior. It was kind of a story within a story. Lots of depth and hidden meanings. I loved it. Keep up the good work! You have an awesome style. ^^

Oh, wow. That's beautiful. And it's true about so many people, too: Mahatma Gandhi, Martin Luther King, Jr., Rachel Corrie, Joy Adamson.

Amazing. I love it. Congratulations. :)