Reviews for And Up And Up And Up

Nemonus 2006-09-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseAh, that was cool. Good momentum and imagery. I don't quite understand the last two lines, though they change the direction well. (about the review you left me, that poem wasn't about any specific college.)
darknessblooms 2006-06-06 ch 1,	abuseI like this title, especially when you paired it like that with the first line. Beautifully written.
Shiori-san 2006-05-21 ch 1,	abuseThe rhyming is really good and it flows beautifully! Only problem I could find is a typo or something on the second-to-last line in the second stanza: "Want go is up a different" I think you're missing a word. Otherwise this is awesome! Rock on!