Ah, that was cool. Good momentum and imagery. I don't quite understand the last two lines, though they change the direction well. (about the review you left me, that poem wasn't about any specific college.)

I like this title, especially when you paired it like that with the first line. Beautifully written.

The rhyming is really good and it flows beautifully! Only problem I could find is a typo or something on the second-to-last line in the second stanza: "Want go is up a different" I think you're missing a word. Otherwise this is awesome! Rock on!