Cubas Coka-Cola is called Tu-Kola and if I never see it again, I will be happy.
Rum and coke is a ** nasty thing to get drunk off.
Spent a little hwil in Cuba not so long ago, but thats probably the only reaosn I can picture all the things you describe.
The bit about the buisness didnt make much sense to me though, unless this is based before the revolution...
Deh- Otehrwise it's real sweet. I love the "Te Amos" line. You could have compeltly finished with that.
Its good. I'll have to check out your toher work too methinks.

Lovelove.

Erasmuss.

That was really beautiful. I'm in awe.

Hi8D=stilltakingCCnotesonedayIwillgetitrightagain=

I absolutely hate you and am dark emerald green with envy at the OH ** geez. This was GOOD. This is a favorite. I loved the vocabulary (how I wish I could have a vocabulary too XD), the perspective, the...everything. Truly original piece. Some spelling mistakes, the html codes didn't work properly and a little too many brackets, but...** that XD I love ya.