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| erasmuss 2008-06-03 ch 1,  | abuseCubas Coka-Cola is called Tu-Kola and if I never see it again, I will be happy. Rum and coke is a ** nasty thing to get drunk off. Spent a little hwil in Cuba not so long ago, but thats probably the only reaosn I can picture all the things you describe. The bit about the buisness didnt make much sense to me though, unless this is based before the revolution... Deh- Otehrwise it's real sweet. I love the "Te Amos" line. You could have compeltly finished with that. Its good. I'll have to check out your toher work too methinks. Lovelove. Erasmuss. |
| katie 2006-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really beautiful. I'm in awe. |
| Stalker 2006-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi8D=stilltakingCCnotesonedayIwillgetitrightagain= |
| Limited Edition 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely hate you and am dark emerald green with envy at the OH ** geez. This was GOOD. This is a favorite. I loved the vocabulary (how I wish I could have a vocabulary too XD), the perspective, the...everything. Truly original piece. Some spelling mistakes, the html codes didn't work properly and a little too many brackets, but...** that XD I love ya. |