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Reviews For: Star Street

The Masked Reviewer 2006-09-02 ch 1,	i like this. when are you going to update?
WaterFox 2006-08-04 ch 6,	I'm a Virgo too and I'm glad that you finally updated. The only thing is that I wished you could have added some romantic moments between Phoebe and Dylan. This is because I am a romantic and Scoprio is such a sexy sign...or are you just waiting for two chapters down?
WaterFox 2006-06-27 ch 5,	I love this! I love how you have certain signs in relationships or related to each other such as the 'fire and air' and 'earth and water'. I like the way you think. If you ever wanted a review about grammar don't look for me to be the one to do it since I'm not so great in that department myself. So, I just read people's stories for the story and talk about plot and all that good stuff. This is just some advice; I think you should post this story instead in the romance or fantasy section. Why, because I think those places better fit a story like this then the general section. As a Virgo I cannot wait until you write your next chapter. I shall be looking VERY forward to it.
WaterFox 2006-06-16 ch 1,	I thought you said that the Leo wouldn't take long? I do enjoy this story very much because of the zodiac signs making them all live together, and I love how you paired Virgo and Scorpio together. I do hope that you update soon and put a little more description and make your chapters longer.
Cirien Phoenix 2006-05-22 ch 1,	Not bad. The next chapter will definitely need a stronger conflict to keep readers with you. It was a good story, but try to be more descriptive. You don't have to be afraid to make a single chapter quite long. Regardless, nicely planned out and still well done. ~Cirien Phoenix P.S. Thank you for the review on "Virgo." Glad you liked it. :) I can't believe that people call virgos "petty critics," that's kind of mean.

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