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wonderoftheyaoi 2008-08-15 ch 27,	abuseOk so yeaha i so love this story please tell me that theres more. i need more i mean i'm not t fan of reading but good god who in the hell wouldn't read this. i love you [ in i friend way of course.]so when can i look forward to the next chapter.
Shadow1290 2008-07-08 ch 27,	abuseWhen are you going to update?! I want to know what happens. Um.. I also have a few... comments though. You have to remember these are teenage BOYS! Teens in normal are all horny so them not doing anything, even handjobs, is really weird. I can understand the 'no sex' but not even touching each other naked or rubbing against each other? It doesnt seem realistic. Anyway I really do love the story... but can you make August a little more.. not so much cry-y face? I DO like this story and will continue reading so please UPDATE! MORE SOON ~shadow
paledaisy78 2008-04-10 ch 27,	abuseoh my god, more please. seriously, you have me so hooked on this story, update soon!
paledaisy78 2008-04-09 ch 15,	abuseso i'll be honest and say that in the beginning, this story wasn't that great. the writing quality was sub-average and the characters were practically bi-polar. not so good. but its gotten WAY BETTER! it doesn't even seem like the same story anymore. you're writing has really improved and it shows through, so kudos! and the characters are a bit more stable in their moods and decisions. i like that cody has a nasty history, it makes for a good plot line. seriously, good job.
bookworm-lovingedward 2008-03-07 ch 27,	abuseyay! Ive been grounded, so I had to print out the story and read it, but now I finally get to review and tell you... YOU ARE A GENIUS! OMG! I love you! I just, ADORE this story to death! I cried, and like, laughed, and screamed in frustration and stormed about and collapsed with laughter and everything, it was SO GOOD! please continue!! I dont want this to be the end of Cody and Ausgust... oh, btw, I drew a pic of them together! (okay, I drew 3, but whatever), and I just love them so much!
LakeAndFlames 2007-11-20 ch 1,	abuseI've just read this story again! It's simply wonderful. BTW Cody looks like Randy Romance xD
ChrisCHJ 2007-11-15 ch 27,	abusecrying tears of sweet joy this is so beautiful, i "heart" you ^^
Back of Beyond 2007-11-01 ch 27,	abuseGreat story. :] Is this the end, or is there more?
DRAGONFIRE04 2007-06-05 ch 27,	abusePlease update this great story.
LakeAndFlames 2007-05-28 ch 26,	abuseI love this story so much! You should make Cody’s 18 birthday during Christmas. It would be so sweet. August could buy him, of course after Cody’s mother approval, a puppy or small kitten so Cody would have chance to take care of something and have less time for thinking and self-pitying.
Iizolda 2007-05-04 ch 27,	abuseSo the angst begins! Love it all! More drama! By the way: August is to salfish and Cody is to to numb. It's so great!
LakeAndFlames 2007-05-01 ch 27,	abuseOMG! What did you do to Cody!? Awesome chapter but one thing is bothering me. Cody’s meeting with Xavier was very dramatic and after that he was acting so cool. Average person after such experience would have nightmares, breakdown etc. He should be crying so hard and feel very scary, unsafe and dirty. And August, all this is partly his fault, and he’s crying instead of making Cody more comfortable. If such thing happened to my love I would be extremely worry about him/her.
JakobJawbreaker 2007-04-27 ch 27,	abusethis is amazing. i love cody! keep up the good work please.
Maris. S 2007-04-26 ch 27,	abuseMy goodness I'm absolutly releived that August stoped being stubborn. Well, for now anyways. Geez, next time he does something stupid like that, i'm going to strangle him with something soft and fluffy
Waiting for Never 2007-04-26 ch 27,	abuseI have read this entire story in two days and just let me say that i absolutely love it. I do think that August cries too much, but he is an emotional character, so i can deal. Again, i love it. Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.

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