THis was pretty good. The theme of imperfection was nice.

Whoa, I am WAY too tired to actually try to think of what you're trying to say but from reading twice I think...THINK I know what you're talking about. You're quite bitter if you think about it and I love your sarcasm, it makes me laugh. Anyways, I can't talk much right now, I have to wait for salmon loaf...so much better than meat loaf you know. I like your poem. It makes me smile...yet in an odd way.