So...beautiful...your vacabulary is so incredible, and the way you write, it paints a picture in my head. On the second stanza, the old saying "something old, something...used" shouldn't "used" be "blue"? Maybe I'm getting it confused, but isn't "used" more or less the same as "old" anyways? Idk...am I being too picky? Either way, it was still beautiful. ^_^

Your choice of vocabulary is beauty in itself.I would love to study something like this in English.Nice to hear from you again, e-mail me sometime if you need.x

Ohh.. I love this. sort of dark and mysterious, and the ending gives off a "dun, dun, dun" vibe

nicely written!

...sounds as though coming full circle...Good writing you have penned.