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bbyxhann
2008-09-18
ch 21,
abusein choir i had to sing that song ,
its okay .
but kinda creepy ,
its sounds pretty though .
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bbyxhann
2008-09-18
ch 20,
abusehuh ?
i dont get the very very end .
why is it that hes still alive ?
not that im complaining ,
but i dont get the cross scar thingy .
bbyxhann
2008-09-16
ch 7,
abuselol i thought the ending was pretty funny .
great job ,
keep it up .
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bbyxhann
2008-09-16
ch 6,
abusesorry i havent really been reviewing the other chapters ,
just got caught up in the story .
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well i really like this story ,
i find it interesting .
great job .
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tucker529
2008-08-21
ch 35,
abuseHey.
So, I was looking through some old e-mails that I have from you when you were sending out chapter notifications to some of the readers, and realized that you haven't updated in AGES. Are you going to ever finish this story? Or did you just lose the inspiration that you had for it?
dora
2008-07-09
ch 35, anon.
abuseHi i no u stoped writing this story awhile ago but i just wanted to say that it is great and i wuld realy realy like if u continued but if u cant its ok.
notwithoutyou
2008-06-01
ch 35,
abusePlease update soon. I wish to know what happens. And that chapter with the "sexual" sector, barely grazed that word. If people can't accept it, they need to man up ;)
Darthstriker
2008-04-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseIts knock! Not nock!

"She heard a nock on the door."
"She heard the nock again."

:p
monkeyinthemiddle2010
2008-01-13
ch 35,
abuseOMG... i just finished reading your story and its VERY GOOD! and i cant believe that you haven't updateed in so long. please please please update soon.
Amanda
2007-12-23
ch 35, anon.
abuseThis story is so good! I wish you would update! Introducing this new part has added a nice twist :]
Kbelle1
2007-12-04
ch 1,
abuseLove the story!
Pls update
EvilNita
2007-11-20
ch 35,
abuseoh wow. I love this story.

Update soon :)
EvilNita
2007-11-20
ch 1,
abuseenticing :)
Jugglingbearperformer
2007-11-19
ch 35,
abuseomg its been soo long since I've actually gotten on fictionpress! This chapter was amazing, I love where you're taking it =] keep up the good work
Jaimilee
2007-10-12
ch 35, anon.
abuseUpdate.
Please.
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