*hugs*what? who? jerks! *growls defensively*it's a great tanka... but what's wrong? you can talk to me!*worries*

sirius

you seem to stray a bit from the typical 5-7-5, since you do 5-7-5-7-7, but, maybe that's some new thing I'm not aware of. I love haiku. Off to read the companion to this now.