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| speeding into eternity 2008-06-23 ch 4,  | abuseit's been a few years since you've updated, but i'd still like to encourage you to continue. it's a very captivating story line. |
| HOSPITALS-ARE-FUN 2007-02-25 ch 4, | abuseOh please oh please continue this! It has so much potential! Well anywho it's doing well right now. Continue writing, and have an awesome-o day! -Corri |
| HOSPITALS-ARE-FUN 2007-02-25 ch 2, | abuseHow cute! Yay for Chris! But...it's going to get worse isn't it? Ah, I don't want to look. But I must read on! |
| Skeptic-Critic 2006-07-20 ch 4, | abuseAw...Please don't end this story..I really like it... |
| Skeptic-Critic 2006-07-20 ch 3, | abuseI'm kinda hoping that you haven't washed your hands of this story and that you just have writer's block or something bcause the more I read of this the captivated and entranced I become... |
| Skeptic-Critic 2006-07-20 ch 2, | abuseOk...So I just had a major blonde moment (even if I'm not blonde)...You mentioned Reba and I figured I'd probably heard it since I do listen to country, but bI couldn'tremember how the song went...Then after reading this I was going tobtell you about a country song this reminded me of...I looked up the song by the one line I remembered and guess what it showed? Fancy by Reba... |
| Skeptic-Critic 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abuseThis seems almost what an epilogue would show...You know, the scene after the story and everything...So, I'm just going to assume it's kinda how the notebook was...Telling the story of the past sorta thing...Wow I'm not sure any of that made sense... |
| kimper 2006-06-19 ch 4, | abuseShort, short chapters. But a very interesting storyline. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully everything will work out eventually for poor Fancy :) |
| sita 2006-06-03 ch 4, anon. | abuseIt's bizarre, but I stumbled on this entirely by accident and now I notice that all but one of your reviews come from people who have reviewed me as well. Odd. I really like this! Of course, I'm pretty much a sucker for anything that involves a boy being dressed up like a girl and sold off. Is that bad? :/ |
| diebyownhands 2006-05-27 ch 4, | abuseI usually like long chapters but these short ones seem to work gives us just enough info to get caught in it |
| Sakru angelqueen 2006-05-24 ch 4, | abuseSweet and preety good. I agree with you on instead of four parts just oen huger chapter butthis pace keeps the reader wanting to go further. Few words in wrong places so anyway if I had to rank it I would say B |
| Esquirella 2006-05-24 ch 4, | abuseSo now he knows he's supposed to be sold by his mother? And he's not upset by it? Strong kid. |
| Esquirella 2006-05-24 ch 3, | abuseAnd now she's "cleaning him up" for the buyers? Not nice of her not to warn him. |
| Esquirella 2006-05-23 ch 2, | abuseIs this her last present to him before she sells him? |
| Esquirella 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abuseInteresting start! |