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| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-13 ch 1,  | abuseGreat verbs. |
| simpleplan13 2006-06-09 ch 1, | abuseI love this.. especially the first part.. the line dangling.. & the next one are extremely powerful and well done.. i love it.. i dont really like the first line though.. i think its unneccesary |
| Der Patrizier 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseI liked this one because I could really relate to it. I like your skills in poetry writing. You should continue the potential you have started. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is so true and was once again written beautifully. I enjoy reading your work. Best of luck with everything! ~smiles :) |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abuseinteresting... opening pandora's box. nicely written keep writing! |