Reviews for Butterfly Net - FictionPress.com

Krystal Garcia 2007-04-30 ch 1,	abusesimple but sweet...lol sappy is right. anyways, keep writing, i enjoy your work.
Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-13 ch 1,	abuseNice diction and metaphors.
simpleplan13 2006-06-09 ch 1,	abuseI like the first stanza and the last one & the line right before the last one a lot.. the rest is good too, but those are my fav part.. I really love the metaphor in the first stanza
Der Patrizier 2006-06-02 ch 1,	abuseWow, nice description of words and expression of feelings! I like this one, especially its directness to the topic. Keep it up.
Chemically Induced 2006-05-30 ch 1,	abuseit may be sappy, but it's a nice poem. the contrasting between the boring strangling day and the change this dude brings is a good one. but its merely a different kidof trsap. but a happy trap. thats pretty cool . imma go check out your friend now. see ya. love, c.induced.
Midnight Star Lights 2006-05-23 ch 1,	abuseThis is simple and beautiful once again. You have a talent! GREAT JOB! ~winks!
Aetha Daemon 2006-05-21 ch 1,	abuseThis took my breath and placed it in the butterfly net, delecate and bodiless, for moments that hung in the air as you twirled in the ecstacy of the smile...you sound like my friend! It is so funny, cute, like a delecate web waiting to be spun...I like the color swirly pictures. Read my poetry--it isn't love stuff, but it is fleeting. Nice and light. Like yours. And this wasn't really sappy, it was more like...spritely and euphoric.