That was really good. I'm here by reccommendation, and so far I like what you've written. :)

-Hope

Wow. This was AMAZING! I LOVED it! Very powerful! The descriptions were SO perfect, and the repeating line, "Three times I fell in love. One time I didn't." was SO perfect. And how on the outside, not-love and narrator looked perfect for each other, but on the inside, everything was wrong. This was fatastic! Great job!

good job!

the end?

Wonderful piece. Nice flow and yet still very realisitc in its account. Your work's always a pleasure to read. Hope you're doing okay! :)

brilliant, you got it... there isnt anything left to say.