Oh my word, keep writing! By all means, keep writing!

Wow. This just gets better and better. Please tell me she's gonna kill him. Please. Well, there's one way for you to let me know. UPDATE AGAIN SOON!

SF

Aw! This was sweet. YOU UPDATED! YAY! Ok, I'm better now. Great chapter. Update soon!

ShadowFane

OMG. She likes Amber...Wow. What a tangled romance. This chapter was nice. Update soon.

ShadowFane

Wow. Nice start. Wonder what's going to happen next...ONE WAY TO FIND OUT!

ShadowFane

I like the out of order-ness. Starting with the image of the petals, and leading into it, then away from it. Sometimes that seems choppy, but you've done it beautifully.

Absolutely beautiful story. I love it. You did a great job.

This brings back memories of childhood, I was fond of the ocean. Children can always isolate the beauty in anything.I love this piece. It has such an ethereal tone to it.