i feel for you! yay, naranasan ko na rin yung ganyan!

:)

hindi patula.. pero ayos ang concept.

Astig to ah! Gusto ko tong line na to:"Paano ka nga naman maririnig ng dalawang tenga kung puso naman ang sarado?"Keep it up!

Astig... mahusay ang mga emosyon na nasa iyong tula =p

keep it up!!

Carpe Diem.-llazuli-

Yo, Tonkies. The poem, I'm happy you've expanded to writing poems in Filipino rather than sticking to English, it's a great change. The poem's rather contemporary, and I like the way it narrates, as if stream of consciousness. It's really good, and the essence. Woah. Very realistic, I applaud you. *bows* Write more.

ang kulit.. it is funny and serious at the same time.. great job..