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| bitterpaper 2006-07-26 ch 1,  | abuseI'm not sure what the NME is, but this totally rang true for me. Silly trend following sheep. |
| amillionlittlepieces 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuselmao! This is awesome! I like how it expresses just how hard it is to change, and that even if you try to chang, the past will never leave you be. |
| eden is burning 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseFirstly, I would like to thank you for the fantastic review - it was without a doubt the best review I've ever gotten, and it just made me very happy. I am also sorry I do not have the time or intelligence to reciprocate, but I am still dropping in to say... That poem was stunning. The cynacism and perception used were beautiuflly snide and ironic, and I have to say one of my favourite lines was "if Pete Doherty is innocent and Kurt Cobain is alive…" because it was just great. The whole thing is sort of a window into the sterotype that some teenagers follow, and I applaud you for your intelligence and maturity. And your music taste too. =) x x x x x x x x x |
| in a jar pk 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseholy **. this was amazing. i love your style! xx |
| Eye of the Needle 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abuse*chuckles* I love it...utterly brilliant. |
| a lonely september 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abusethis...this is amazing. i dont think ive ever read anything this good in all of fictionpress. damn. just, this is smart, man. maybe i'm just a stupid ** and all, but this is damn good. really it is. (i love the kurt reference). |
| Coda Lovelance 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI applaud you: this piece is very well-written. I love the repetition, and the reality of this piece. It flows really well, and has a decided beat to it. I must admit, having just come from school, when I first opened up this piece it was daunting (so many words!), but I'm glad I read it, because i would've been missing out on some great work if i hadn't. Keep writing, I look forward to your next piece. |
| bihzhu 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abusewow. this is real nice. really great concept, but best of all, you executed your concept really really articulately. me likey.. :) |