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| Orion Demasecus 2006-05-27 ch 1,   | Strong imagery and good exploration of the human condition. Everyone feels like they're being controlled during at least one part of their life and this poem captures that feeling. I have read your friend's poem and I will read more of his/your stuff later on when it is no longer 4:00 in the morning. As for why I am awake right now I'll just say that coke/pepsi are at fault. ~Orion Demasecus |
| SaRmelLexia 2006-05-25 ch 1, | interesting theme that you pick...i like it! anyway thanks for reviewing my work! and 'talentless' may not be a word but it just describe me... =) lolz...so anyway, thx again Lots of Love, hugs n Kisses |
| Anaare 2006-05-25 ch 1, | A very interesting piece, which I enjoyed reading. Well done! |
| Alena D'Etoiles 2006-05-22 ch 1, | again, O_o awsome... |