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| Krystal Garcia 2007-04-30 ch 1,   | your personality is the total opposite of Emily Dickinson, and yet your poetry does what hers did, except not in a morbid way...anyways, it's so cool that you can turn an inanimate object such as a dress and make it sound so beautiful. Keep writing! It's interesting. |
| Chocolate Marshmallow Boi 2006-12-16 ch 1, | Nice, nice... You make your words throb with life:) |
| blue 2006-10-20 ch 1, | wow i was so totally impressed by your personification. hunny where can i get me one of those dresses. that was such a beautiful poem, so easy to connect with and relate to. mwah xxoo adieu l'amour blue |
| boys kiss girls 2006-09-18 ch 1, | This made me smile because I have a couple of articles of clothing that I would die for. Well, okay, maybe I wouldn't die for them... but they're pretty cool. Fantastic job on the flow in this. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-13 ch 1, | Ah so tender and fragile! |
| simpleplan13 2006-06-09 ch 1, | I lvoe the personification here and the mtaphor in the second stanza..its very cute.. we all have clothing that makes us feel good.. unique and great |
| Der Patrizier 2006-06-02 ch 1, | The craftsmanship and contents in this poem is simply amazing. I loved it. You write with a surreal and artistic touch. Try checking out my works whenever you've got some time. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-05-23 ch 1, | This is beautiful and the formatting of the bold letter added to your poem. GREAT JOB! ~winks! |
| frayedlifeforce 2006-05-23 ch 1, | this was pretty and sweet, it had a nice topic.good writing too!keep writing. |
| eden is burning 2006-05-22 ch 1, | That was just a beautiful poem. Lovely imagery, contrast... Well written as always. Thank you also for the lovely review, you made my day. x x x x |
| a lonely september 2006-05-22 ch 1, | pretty simply, this is just so pretty. so well written, so nice, and sweet, and... yeah. im stupid at reviewing, but this is good. you did a nice job. |
| Aquafied 2006-05-22 ch 1, | white reminds me of virginity.though, i am a sucker for white dresses. so gorgous. nice. |
| Dying Rose 2006-05-22 ch 1, | "As I tenderly strip youfrom my softest hanger,I slowly step in.and you strip away myugliness.and insecurity." Wonderful lines. This is a very beautiful poem. It strikes me in it's simple, straightforward emotion and tugs at my heart strings in my realization how well you have captured something I've felt before but never have been able to write about. You are an awesome writer. Keep up the good work. ~Ashley~ |
| Kelil 2006-05-22 ch 1, | Oh, very cool. Love the line "I melt like caramel oozing into you." Nice variation on a love poem. I enjoyed it. |