|Reviews for Our Lives Are Like That Of A Quilt|
| toxic-noodle725 9/3/06 . chapter 1
oh wow that was very creative. wonderful piece. do keep writing!
| scratchmynameinconcretestars 8/1/06 . chapter 1
that is really good, you are a good writer... and can compare simple things to life.
| Princess-anna57 5/29/06 . chapter 1
Nice work, I like this. Write on!
| steev 5/22/06 . chapter 1
The comparison of life & a quilt (tapestry, etc.) is very cliched, & this poem does not show the similarities in any new way.
The inversion of "are three" and the other instances aren't warranted by any structural or sonic reasons, & only distract.
Also, this is closer to prose with line breaks than poetry- look at it this way:
"Then there is that inner part of us, that part of spirit, of heart and mind that when properly cultivated gives to us true meaning and purpose."