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Polished Gem 2006-08-29 . chapter 1
As you already know...I've read this. It just wasn't posted when I read it so I never got around to reviewing it. You know this is one of my favorites of your pieces...and I like how it ties in with Fallen Angels. It gives more background detail to the story. Ooh...so, now that I've reviewed this...are you going to add more to Fallen Angels?
Darkened1 2006-07-09 . chapter 1
Aw!! Poor Lily (an evil laugh bubbles behind my lips) I am so twisted!! Gald you posted this, and I have ideas/rough drafts for gabriel sketched out... but I can't get the right music for him still... Can I have the invitation to your photobucket where you posted the pics of my Gabriel, that may gimme a solid idea ofr his pose and facial structure...
CK Shorty 2006-07-05 . chapter 1
Your detail is awesome! Way better than mine could ever be! Keep up the good work.
criti-sized 2006-06-01 . chapter 1
I frequently return to people's profiles, because I know they update, and I happened to check your profile again to see if you'd updated anything, and you did. The last time I tried to review you the server was down, so here I am reviewing.

This was very nice in how it explained her emotions towards everything. Of cousre me being somebody who doesn't think love can come so easily, I'll keep my comments to myself. But it was good in how she didn't stay with him.

I have no questions.
kaylajac 2006-05-23 . chapter 1
Oh, that was amazing! Gorgeous writing, and your descriptions and writing style are just beautiful.
Darkened1 2006-05-23 . chapter 1
Hey! (Too lazy to sign in again...)That was pretty cool. The part where she left and cried made me smile a lot. Someone should've died. Morbid romance, what can I say?

And Yeah, I have questions.

(enter heavy breathing) What did you do last summer? (maniacal laughter, phone click, dial tone) THE END
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