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| KuteVampire 2007-09-07 ch 1,   | HEY PALOMA! I THINK I HEARD THIS STORY ALREADY! BUT YEAH IM BACK ON FICTION PRESS! AAHAHAHAHAHAH NEW ACCOUNT OF COURSE. ITS ME LIZZY BY THE WAY FROM OSA TWO YEARS AGO I THINK. DUDE IM WRITING AGAIN. HOORAY. WELL I BEEN STAYED WRITING WHEN I LEFT OSA ANYWAYS. PEACE! |
| Wannabewizard 2007-04-04 ch 1, | i like it strangely, usely hooror sstories just scare thw wits out of me. |
| Tanaka Sakura 2007-02-06 ch 1, | I'm never going to eat another muffin again. |
| bitterpaper 2006-08-11 ch 1, | Dayum...I'm going to be avoiding bakeries from now on. And I thought I remembered my Girl Scout bakery outings as something fun...::shudders:: this was actually, IMO, pretty darn well written. You've captured the third grade spirit pretty well. Apple and Flower are pretty...special kids. Eh? PS--their grandpa's a skeleton type, eh? Apple and Flower should just use his bones...simpler and closer...eh? |
| Apoc Genesis 2006-06-06 ch 1, | Jesus...though it has not diminished my love of muffins it definitly does justice to that awfully creepy nursery rhyme. Its not the words thats creepy..its the tune. The imagery was really, REALLY strong...im not sleepign tonight...great work though! |
| Jasrey Blue 2006-06-06 ch 1, | Moonbryte is Peurto Rican and Black. Trust me, I'm not a lesbian but definately has an **. |
| kutelizzy 2006-06-05 ch 1, | Attention evry1 Moonbrryte has no **. Once again...Moonbryte has no **. Thank You. lol! jk what's up buddy. Its me lizzy. Dude check all my reviews. Im the most hated on fictionpress. Giggle giggle! |
| Sting Ferdinand 2006-05-27 ch 1, | Well, I'm never buying another muffin again. |
| writergurlLW 2006-05-22 ch 1, | this story was kind of disturbing yet i like that, i kind of like gore(dont ask) I loved your ending statement the most. |
| The Great Cthulhu Plushie 2006-05-22 ch 1, | Intriguing...such a simple story, yet so disturbing. Kind of like one of those "cautionary tales" parents tell their kids so they don't wander into strangers' houses. Or maybe that was just my mom...no wonder I'm so f*ked up :P |