Please continue this story!! Your slowly tourchering your readers!!

I love this so far, yet sadden that there isn't anymore. Please write more soon. I really, really want to know what happens next.

I can't stop reading.

I must read more.

I love it so far.

Anneliese! Ok I am done with that. I love the mysterious characters that keep popping up... who's next?

Ok anyways this is a really good start to the chapter. I cant wait to see miranda's reaction to her new way of life once she actually starts living it.

good chapter... I think this whole story is turning out really good... I dont really know what else to say than that, just that it is kind of confusinf where you are going with this but I am sure all will be revealed soon enough

I really love it! Sorry i havent reviewed in a while. But i really like where youre going with this, its definitely a keeper. Also, i want to get to know vipir more and there needs to be some more plot. but i love the weaving youre doing with her family and such.

It's a bit off, but nice work. I'm starting to love this more and more. Till next time

waterhealer

Something feels a bit off so far. I don't know. It's really interesting though.

In the prologue ypu said Miranda was her name and that Kitana is a name that she hadn't heard in a while. So why is everyone suddenly calling her Kitana?

i thought the story was good. In the first chapter there were a few mistakes, but still good!

i just dont know what to say...

I think a little more discription would be great... especially when Viper appears... you have a little but a little more could just make the reader feel as if he was reading right behind their shoulder. Also you amy want to describe a brief hatred between kitana and the council as to prove that it was her last resort or only option. Just a few things that could improve the chapter if you wanted to look into it. All in all It was a great chapter.

This is actually going to my favorites. This has much potaintal. Keep up the great work. Till next time

waterhealer

Wow, I have the same idea as yours (not really) and the same title--but mine was here first. (sorry.) Anyway, this is great so far. Keep up the great work. Till next time

waterhealer

Wow! Very cool story. I really love it! Keep writing! Update really soon because I'm really wanting to find out what happens next. :D