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| ammullyaa 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseThis makes me sad. "This" being that I've devoured everything you've written for this site in a matter of hours and now there isn't anything left. That being said, your writing is absolutely amazing- there's no other way to put it. And also, you make me jealous. Dear God, you're my age and you're up there on my list of favorite authors. But I guess I can learn to live with that. So basically, thank you and please write some more. |
| holly 2008-06-18 ch 20, anon. | abuseI read this story a couple of days ago and didn't have time to review then, but I loved it. I stayed up til one in the morning to finish it. Its one of the only stories on fictionpress that I could bring myself to read front to end. I usually stop half way through out of boredom or because the stores aren't well written, or the characters are annoying. This story, however, has great characters that actually have depth. I love how the story progresses. The only criticism I have is about the character of Andrew. He seems to change constantly and have a completely different personality everytime he's mentioned. One time he's really popular and has a lot of friends. The next, he seems to only have Jack as a friend. Just wanted to let you know that got kind of confusing. Other that, great job. Loved it. :) |
| InsaneWriterGirl 2008-06-18 ch 20, | abuseThis is, hands down, the best story I've ever read online. Also, it's probably one of my favorite stories and I enjoy re-reading it from time to time. I'm sure it would be easily excepted at any publishing house. |
| oh y'know.that girl 2008-06-18 ch 20, | abuseYay! The End. I love this story. I really can't find much wrong with it. It's really awesome. |
| geminibaby6789 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI love this story! Thanks! :) |
| Aranalany 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseWell, that was a hell of a nice story. I admit I had read quite a lot of stories about bets etc, but this one beats them all. The characters' behaviors n thoughts are very well expressed, and make the fic very nice to read. So, thanks for letting me read such a nice fic, and keep it up =p |
| Mellifluence 2008-05-24 ch 20, | abuseOh, this is good. For the slow-burning realism, the brilliant characterisation, the witty dialogue, and most of all, for completely turning all eye-rollingly typical romantic cliches up on their heads - I applaud you. No fireworks, no drama, no Hollywood cheese. ...That's amore. ^_~ |
| crosen 2008-05-22 ch 20, | abuseaww. how sweet. i even started crying in the end, when he finally told her that he loved her. very good work. it was a blast to read. |
| cls81690 2008-05-14 ch 20, | abuseAh I love it! It's so unique and funny. The people are quirky and believable, very genuine, and the plot...I love the way you deviated from the standard boy-wins-bet-and-girl-doesn't-mind, and even from the still-predictable "bet, 'end' to bet, girl finds out bet never ended, fight, make up, love/perfection, wins bet to girl's satisfaction." |
| cls81690 2008-05-14 ch 17, anon. | abuseHi there. I'm really enjoying this story! Just wanted to ask how Noelle could have been whispering in Andrew's ear. Maybe whispering with her head tipped near him, so he could see her lips? It caught me off-guard! Sorry I haven't been reviewing. But, let me just say that it's a refreshingly real, simple, and likeable story with great characters. |
| rjdickert 2008-05-13 ch 20, anon. | abuseahh!! i loved it! it was amazing, i liked how the friendship evolved and it wasn't too rushed. ~rjdickert |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-12 ch 20, | abuseOkay, I love it! Now to get on with the homework i've put aside. :D Theres heaps of it :S |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-12 ch 5, | abuseI like it! |
| rainbabie 2008-05-09 ch 20, | abuseah! It's such a cute ending! :) I'm totally cheesing at work. Thanks for a great story! |
| WhiteChristmas 2008-05-07 ch 20, | abuseOh my goodness, how amazing was this?! Your character developments are just extraordinary. Piper and Donovan are the type of friends that will never lose each other. And I absolutely adore the ending, especially the epilogue. Nicely written. Congrats, though I'm two years late! |