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angelicdust 2007-05-24 ch 11,	chealsea's so confused right now! a part of her begins to settle in and the other..well she is so particular not to call this place home. it's just funny! she's got some lessons to learn.. thinking she could make the others look pretty.. and also you dont have to buy a present to show you care about someone..(although her old friends probably didn't)..and also not to dismiss people because of their looks (phil). i love this story..it's got great potential! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
angelicdust 2007-05-24 ch 10,	wow..i'm starting to like allistair too! the way she felt more at home here than at Vancouver only shows vivian and co. weren't her real friends in the first place. vivian seems so shallow now. i'm happy that chealsea feels she has someone she can share things with..and yes, omg a friend!
angelicdust 2007-05-24 ch 9,	i seriously feel sad for Chealsea..sigh..she's having a real tough time dealing with things. she tried sticking up for her friends so that's good. she should just ignore that complete loser Tara. i hope she tells her friends from her old school the truth soon. and craig is such a great brother!
angelicdust 2007-05-24 ch 8,	chealsea's new friends ROCK! they were so loyal though they hardly knew her! and in my last review..i meant i wouldnt count too much on tara, not allison.hehe. she was so open with craig.. i liked that. and i agree with chealsea on one thing..grey IS a lifeless color!
angelicdust 2007-05-24 ch 7,	she just HAD to have amanda and co.! and she's discovering all these new feelings she'd never felt before! and i'm hooked to this story! allistair seems pretty decent..all of them are. even brittany, allison, jason don't seem like the typical popular ones..they seem decent too. okay, i wouldnt count on allison too much.good job. just one thing "..too old to be 'new'." is written as 'knew'
angelicdust 2007-05-19 ch 6,	i think i'm starting to like amanda with every chapter! she's just so genuinely nice. a little dent chealsea's EgoArmour, huh? she needed it..ok that sounded pretty mean too..but she really needed it! there were a few typos: 'shieks' for 'shrieks of laughter' and 'giggled' for 'giggles'
angelicdust 2007-05-19 ch 5,	the way she got around getting invited to the party was cunning! and clever! especially Brittany's compliment/insult test..good she's starting to realise her heart says something and her brain something else.
angelicdust 2007-05-16 ch 4,	i hope amanda's the one to make chealsea look at her own flaws first..it's the same all over the world..the most popular group doesn't always have the best of the people..keith and megan were okay. so she has a plan..i think she'll succeed in the beginning
angelicdust 2007-05-16 ch 3,	hey..meg sounds nice to me and amanda's a pretty interesting character too...don't think i've come across anyone like her in the other stories i read..so chealsea's life was easy-going before? hmm..things won't be all great for her then. the way she felt indignant for feeling timid/awkward shows she was pretty much one of the most popular ones back home. meg's 'what, do you like, die?'-'Yes' was good..like the way when things are supposedly serious but it makes you grin-they're always the best ones!
angelicdust 2007-05-16 ch 2,	the stewardess' behaviour made me smile..'ultra chipper smile' and 'dangerously close to slicing my nostrils'! and in the last chapter the kids on the brochure who smile so much that it looks painful..it's always like that..always..wonder why? hmm.. there are a few typos which i think should be edited.. though chealsea's seems rude and all..her sarcasm is spot on..('professional')
angelicdust 2007-05-16 ch 1,	a good beginning..chealsea sounded somewhat like a spoilt brat..hehe.. but hey, what's the fun when all you're writing is about the perfect guys and perfect girls? some change. i liked the way you wrote about her trying to change her parents' mind-the part 'I tried being mature and responsible...I tried pleading..' good job.
An Unwanted Accesory 2006-10-22 ch 10,	this is very very good. only whens the romance gonna start? hah... anyway this is very well written. a few grammatical errors here and there but thats okay. anyway seriously though. im ready for romance! haha. Analeigh
love it 2006-07-05 ch 10,	update i can't write much more but i am saying update
ghettogirl 2006-07-05 ch 1,	i just wanted to say that it would be funny if she went back and her parentswere acting all 'i miss sweetie ' and giving her presents and and she ignored them and wasn't sad when she had to leave but before she went she lashed out at her "friends",told them that they were bullies and like that.I ain't a writter but i read at a college graduate level and i am in grade 6. I read all the chapters but my siter is loe so she needs to review(twins)update
mylittlechangingtruths 2006-06-28 ch 10,	my little chelsea is growing up!! cackle yay.. she's finally gaining some REAL confidence, and making REAL friends!! horaah!!

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