Wow. I liked the ending...but so sad! If I were you, I'd make this a little longer...spend some more time exploring her thoughts, state of mind. Great job! ~Katie

This was very nice, I liked the way in which you portrayed her feelings towards what had happened in the past to her.

Wow, where does your sotries come from? Do you ever use what's happening in your life in your stories?You are the best writer! I look up to you in so many ways!-Keria