 Twilight Starr 2008-03-19 . chapter 1Great poem. It really gives insight into your life.
Good luck with poetry and life.
Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~ |
 Another KraZy SkrewUP 2007-08-31 . chapter 1 Nice. And I can totally relate. Best of luck, mon homme. ^_~ |
 Dartxni 2007-01-14 . chapter 1And me.
I liked how you told the whole story from little girl to little boy. |
 warriorboy 2006-12-14 . chapter 1He’s just the same boy that he’s always been;
yes - that little boy is me.
glad you got there, it sucks though...the getting there. But once you do it's like a bucket of water straight to the face and everything makes sense. sorry, rambling, good work. |
 lordelfy 2006-06-21 . chapter 1this is amazing, there is nothing else to describe it |
 DamascusDragon 2006-05-24 . chapter 1That's really amazing, I liked it a lot, keep writing Amber! Lol this is a cool line: "so she thought she’d give that name a whirl." The word 'whirl' is just really good there, hehehe. |