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Miry Spectrum of Claustrophobia
steev
2006-05-23
ch 1,
abuse
The prevalence of the archaism is silly, ostentatious, and renders everything ridiculously melodramatic.
Honestly, it reads like meaningless blather, with there being no real connection between similes/metaphors and no constant, clear narrative.
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