This is a really great poem. I can realte. Sleeping makes it all go away, atleast for the time being. My fav lines were But i shoudnt run, not escape what I should face. Well done.

haha short and sweet indeed.

It's good but I think the ending needs to be stronger to back up the rest of the poem^_^

hmm... interesting. I like the concept of this.

Yeah, short and sweet, to the point and I can relate to this well. Great poem, keep it up!